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    <title>Did You Feel That?</title>
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        <title>Training to Write </title>   
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family: Arial;">The woman stood with her
hands on her hips, hair tussled and blowing as traffic blew past her on the
side of the road. She watched with puzzlement as steam hissed from under the
hood of the car, a mid-90s model sedan built somewhere in </span><span style="font-family: Arial;">. She waved when she saw the break lights of <strong style="">my</strong> truck, indicating help was on its way. She stood approximately
5&#39;6&quot; with spiked heels which elongated her shapely calves. She had a full
figure packed into a tight package, which was all clearly revealed by her low
cut t-shirt and blue-jean mini skirt. </span></p>



<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family: Arial;">The day was hot and she was
clearly flustered, by the heat and the broken-down vehicle. Mid-thirties, sandy
brown hair and dark brown eyes lined with a black pencil. We looked over her
car and made introductions. Her name was Maureen. She was headed out of town to
visit a girl-friend. She leaned over her car and pushed her lips and breast
forward. The details of her sexuality were overwhelming—and her damsel in
distress act was doing the trick. &quot;Thanks for stopping,&quot; she said
with a slight southern accent. &quot;I think it overheated, darn thing. Can you
give me a ride into town?&quot; </span></p>



<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family: Arial;">As we walked towards the
truck, she leaned in taking an arm and said, &quot;I really appreciate your
help. I could have been standing her all day. I&#39;m sure glad you stopped.&quot;
Back on the road headed in the opposite direction, she turned on the radio and
started flipping through the channels. &quot;Hope you don&#39;t mind,&quot; she
said, &quot;I can&#39;t believe how hot it is today.&quot; We listened to the music
with out saying much more for the next couple of minutes. </span></p>







<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family: Arial;">She started rummaging around
in her purse, and then she stopped abruptly.<span style="">&#160;
</span>&quot;If you don&#39;t mind me saying,&quot; she said as a commercial for a
local car dealer came over the speakers, &quot;You look like you could get
laid.&quot; She watched with predator-like fascination as the shock of her
words filled the air. The words rippling like the waves of heat emanating from
the road. She straightened her back and said, &quot;I could do it, but you
should know I don&#39;t do it for free. I&#39;m a call girl.&quot; Silence clung to the
moment, and then the radio announcer broke in with news of war overseas.
Maureen sighed. &quot;May I smoke?&quot; she asked. The flame of her lighter
flickered before she finished her question</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family: Arial;">Fine lines appeared around
her eyes that hadn&#39;t seemed to be there before. Her shoulders slouched slightly
as she sucked in smoke and seductively exhaled out the window. We arrived at
the service station several minutes later. As she climbed out the car, she
paused then leaned back in extending her hand. She pressed a card with her
number into <strong style="">my</strong> palm.<span style="">&#160; </span>&quot;Thanks again for the lift, and please,
call if you change your mind.&quot; She shut the door, winked through the
window, and then walked away. Her hips shifting with each step, rippling like
the words and possibilities she just left in the truck behind her.</span><br /></p><p class="MsoNormal">

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<p class="MsoNormal">***<em>This is a fiction writing exercise, any resemblance to anyone real or alive is simply synchronicity.</em>***</p>

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        <title>I Wonder</title>   
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        <p>If I could start writing something again. On a regular basis?&#160; </p>   <p style="clear:both;"> 
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